Hi Jake Its me Dani your work is awesome just sometimes you can copy people but It means your teaching then how to do the work but nice job. this you should be proud of it bye Jake.
Hi my name is kaunteya.I like how you used the bad fish and the good fish about good stuff and bad stuff.My favourite bit was when you told us to not talk over the teacher because it's really rude.I also like how you put your full stops in that makes it heaps of sense.
I it's Dion,just checking out your blog.I think the stinky fish pic is funny and I beat you did your B.E.S.T at it.I think you should work on it more.By: Dion.
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ReplyDeleteHi Jake Its me Dani your work is awesome just sometimes you can copy people but It means your teaching then how to do the work but nice job. this you should be proud of it bye Jake.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is kaunteya.I like how you used the bad fish and the good fish about good stuff and bad stuff.My favourite bit was when you told us to not talk over the teacher because it's really rude.I also like how you put your full stops in that makes it heaps of sense.
ReplyDeleteHi Jake it is Kirsty. Good job but it could use some interisting words
ReplyDeleteHI it's me Angus i thick the picture funny.next time do more writing. Jake you are awesome
ReplyDeleteI it's Dion,just checking out your blog.I think the stinky fish pic is funny and I beat you did your B.E.S.T at it.I think you should work on it more.By: Dion.
ReplyDeleteHi jake.amazing words. I think you can add a little more detail in stinky fish.From Nirvana
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