My story about the port hills fire

This is my story about the port hills fire 

I was first scared when I noticed it It looked pretty cool at night time but then I had the feeling that I feel really really sorry for the people who lived on the port hills.

I got home and went outside to play then I saw a huge blazing fire on the port hills. I ran Inside and told my dad and he said what I was like go have a look and he did go have look. Then he ran inside and started packing just incase we would get evacuated but we didn’t get evacuated.

Then I heard a car crash because It was too busy looking at the fire one person got injured by breaking their arm the car looked really wrecked and damaged.

Glass on the road the front of the car was pushed right into the inside the airbags were out ambulances and police were there and one of the people had to get cut out of the car.

When I went out to play I saw a huge blaze. I was a little scared then I ran inside and turned my computer on and went on youtube and searched up port hills fire. Someone was already filming. He was right next to the burning hot blaze and he was getting a little bit of ash on the camera then…

He started running and the video ended there. I really wonder what happen to him and I hope he was Ok.

The fire got under control and got put out now I feel really safe and protected now because my dad will not let me get hurt that’s the reason why I fell protected. The reason I feel safe is because the fire is put out yaaaay!!!!!!!

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