A winter poem

This winter rimu class have been writing winter cinquains. 

A cinquain is another version of a poem.

here is mine.

My writing

Today I'm going to be looking at my progress in writing.

This is what I did in the start of the year.

In term one, I didn't use any paragraphs.

This is now.

Here you can see that I have used my paragraphs and punctuation.