Hi Jake it's me Elham. I really liked your story because you have used lots of adjective. Next time when you are writing a blog post write it in low case. How did you put a doc in you blog? Blog u later!
Kia ora Jake its Aryan here checking out your blog! I love all the vocabulary also the interesting plot! One small problem, next time maybe make the writing a bit bigger because it was quite hard to read. Anyways awesome post! 😀
Well done Jake this was really good but you forgot to put speech marks for the people that are talking and you should of put the writing instead of the instructions.
Hi Jake it's Hunter from Rata class. I like your post because you have said that you put your head down and started your work and you finished it so quickly. It reminds me of my porter pig story it is kind of similar at the start. I noticed a mistake about you explaining what you were doing. you spelt story wrong, there is no e in story. That's all from me Jake blog you later.
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Hi Jake it's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story because you have used lots of adjective.
Next time when you are writing a blog post write it in low case.
How did you put a doc in you blog?
Blog u later!
Kia ora Jake its Aryan here checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteI love all the vocabulary also the interesting plot!
One small problem, next time maybe make the writing a bit bigger because it was quite hard to read.
Anyways awesome post! 😀
Well done Jake this was really good but you forgot to put speech marks for the people that are talking and you should of put the writing instead of the instructions.
ReplyDeleteHi Jake it's Hunter from Rata class. I like your post because you have said that you put your head down and started your work and you finished it so quickly. It reminds me of my porter pig story it is kind of similar at the start. I noticed a mistake about you explaining what you were doing. you spelt story wrong, there is no e in story. That's all from me Jake blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Jake it is Siyona here I love you story and I like your wow words It is Really good but you forgot to put punctuations.
ReplyDeleteHello Jake Mikayla A here I like you story and you need to Copy your story and then past it on your post bye see you soon.
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